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Aug 15, 2023Liked by Renton Hawkey (*rent)

Looks great man!

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These are great. Punches up the style and gives it dimension without clashing

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Aug 15, 2023Liked by Renton Hawkey (*rent)

Ha, I saw the headline for this one as thought "I thought he HATED coloring!" Really interesting seeing these. The pages that work best/you like best seem to have faded yellows, reds and then a darker, deeper blue/black balancing those out - the night sky in the opening spread, the water on the final page. Probably lightening up the yellows on the pages that seem "off", and adding some darker blue/black might work. Not that I have any practical idea of what I'm talking about, and not that you're going to jump back in with these, but it's the one thing I noticed without really dwelling on it.

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Aug 15, 2023Liked by Renton Hawkey (*rent)

DAAAAAMN! That's look smooth in color!

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